My current writing style is to review and edit each chapter as I write, rather than leaving the edits until the first draft’s completion as I had done previously. The benefit is that I would spend far less time in edits compared to the second method and the details would be much fresher in my mind. Conversely, edit as I write would slow down the daily and weekly word count. But I view this as a reasonable tradeoff.
Right now, I’m in the latter portion of the current manuscript. Our MC is returning to NYC while riding on his flying serpent. But some New Yorkers are upset by this. Why should a Beastmaster enjoy special privileges to fly across the city sky? And endanger local residents with a possible crash into tall buildings?
So i needed to come up with a reasonable explanation that City Hall could offer to justify this situation. Otherwise, we would have civilians riding horses on the street and pretend these creatures are tamed beasts, too. What I came up with was treating our MC as an emergency responder who REQUIRE his tamed beast to react to emergencies ASAP rather than a privileged BENEFIT. One change of the word resolved this theoretical problem.
If we had used AI to generate the content, it wouldn’t necessarily appreciate the difference or nuance between these two words in this context. This is the sort of human touch needed in writing stories, in my view. Will AI someday offer such nuanced wording? Perhaps. But not currently.